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Write a Short Story - Skydiving related

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All great - keep em coming getting lots of ideas.

My effort is a bit more subtle:

Should I go out or not? Been sitting by the door contemplating for 15 minutes. Finally the door opens, I stare out, frightened, excited, am I ready? What the hell, I leap out. I’m overwhelmed, I’m falling, was this a mistake? I pull the parachute, all is quite, I’m ecstatic.

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The green fields, the singing birds and the unsuspecting people, I can see them when I look down.
The bright sun, the blue sky and the small airplane, I can see them when I look up.
So here I am, between heaven and earth, ready to go to either one.
"One day, your life will flash before your eyes. Make sure it's worth watching."

Dudeist Skydiver #101

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Ok Here's another true story.


I knelt down next to my black rig and started to stow the brakes. A woman came up to me and stood over me. She asked what I was doing. I was on the next plane and had to pack quickly. Then she asked, "Why are you packing my rig?"

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Way too funny...I would have watched, and not said anything until you finished:)
I woke up next to a blowup doll Ash....so what do you think?

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The green fields, the singing birds and the unsuspecting people, I can see them when I look down.
The bright sun, the blue sky and the small airplane, I can see them when I look up.
So here I am, between heaven and earth, ready to go to either one.



VERY NICE!
Why would anyone jump out of a perfectly good airplane? Cause the door was open!

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jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. jump, pull, land, pack. bonfire. beer.



Only 12 jumps??? Pussy! :ph34r:
"Mediocre people don't like high achievers, and high achievers don't like mediocre people." - SIX TIME National Champion coach Nick Saban

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The "exactly 50 words" restriction makes it interesting.

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Two and a half miles above the ground I crouched in the door. Below, the ground slowly crept by. My first solo. Think it through.

Had I packed it right?
Did I have full control over my body and emotions?
Did I have the courage?

Green light.

Ready, set, go.


quade -
The World's Most Boring Skydiver

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I found myself sitting in a corner with a gaggle of mindless squawking geese. Though cute, my head began to hurt. I stood up, took some Advil to relieve my throbbing headache, and went to sit by the fire to rest my brain. Yup, some more time wasted on DZ.com.

Edit- FYI not directed at anyone, or you quade, you were just last on the thread :)

So there I was...

Making friends and playing nice since 1983

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Here's some made up stories.


I went to an airport to make my first ever skydive. The jumpmaster said, "After you jump, pull this cord to open your parachute. I asked, "What if that doesn't work?" He said, "Then pull this cord." I asked, "What happens if that doesn't work?" He said, "Isn't it obvious?"



Skydivers know – the refreshing feel of cool air rushing around them as they fly towards the earth – dancing through the sky with the greatest of ease - the thrill of victory – the agony of the feet – a swoop towards the ground to stop perfectly – and most especially why birds sing.


It's almost like the twitter game, only longer.

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Make It Happen
Parachute History
DiveMaker

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Skydivers know – the refreshing feel of cool air rushing around them as they fly towards the earth – dancing through the sky with the greatest of ease - the thrill of victory – the agony of the feet – a swoop towards the ground to stop perfectly – and most especially why birds sing.



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quade -
The World's Most Boring Skydiver

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Blame Bill Gates or the hyphens.

Skydivers know – the refreshing feel of cool air rushing around them as they fly towards the earth – dancing through the sky with the greatest of ease - the thrill of victory – the agony of the feet – a swoop towards the ground to a perfect stop – and most especially why birds sing.


We opened up the can of peas. We were cooking now. Little green dots were everywhere. There were many a pair of shooters taking pictures of the tiny green dots. The can of peas, dispersed by the wind, landed all over the countertops and floor. Ah, the good old days.

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Parachute History
DiveMaker

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A weekend of hard skydiving. Shocked, I realise the red light is already on! I pull down my visor shouting DOOR!.
Green light - mutter 'ready, set go - ARCH' and assume boxman.
My motorbike slams on the asphalt. Did I just femur?
"That formation-stuff in freefall is just fun and games but with an open parachute it's starting to sound like, you know, an extreme sport."
~mom

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The green fields, the singing birds and the unsuspecting people, I can see them when I look down.
The bright sun, the blue sky and the small airplane, I can see them when I look up.
So here I am, between heaven and earth, ready to go to either one.



VERY NICE!



Love that too :) Nicely put.
UK skydiver moving to British Columbia in early 2011 - any recommendations?

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