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Hottie Packer has been Offered to Julia but she has not yet accepted.



I am flattered... :$... I think that I can do that, be the hottie packer... Gotta read the script though.. hahaha




theres no reading in porn movies....just like theres no acting :D:D:D
"Professor of Pimpology"~~~Bolas

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Gee, wasn't there someone around here that used to write porn scripts?! :P



That's just what I said earlier!! You did that once before! :D:D:D
"Mediocre people don't like high achievers, and high achievers don't like mediocre people." - SIX TIME National Champion coach Nick Saban

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Once upon a time there was a very horny woman. She met this really nice guy, he was kinda shy and older than her. They began to speak and flirt. they both returned to their homes with the other on the mind. They masterbated about each other. On their next meeting, it was at a party, each with their own date. it was awkward at best. they tried to be casual but their eyes told the truth about them. They went their separate ways again. One day by chance, they met at the dropzone where they proceeded to make a date to see each other after they were done jumping together that day. They played in the sky all day and danced in the clouds. It was like some dream out of poetry. They blended in the sky like cake and frosting. What a day. He took off in his convertable mustang, after he let her know that he would be coming to pick her up about 8pm. She left the dz in her jeep and they both smiled all the way to their hoomes. She wore a lovely white sundress that was tight on the top with little spagetti straps, and he wore a nice shirt and 501 levis with no holes. He picked her up and off they went to have dinner and drinks together. their minds flowed together with conversation, and laughter. At last it was late and they had to decide if it was time. He kissed her, and she kissed him back. That was all she wrote and soon they were at her place-engaged in each other. She got him through the door and dropped to her knees. She undid his pants and pulled them down. She began kissing and licking his cock. It was like she never touched her dinner because she looked like she was starving for that cock. He didn't like her hairstyle because he redid it for her while she ate. She enticed him into the bedroom. His pants came all the way off his shirt was a pile on the chair, and her dress was now in a heap on the floor. She had on her heels and a thong and a nice white lacy bra. She sat him on the bed and grasped his ass cheeks and threw him backwards on the bed and began to kiss his inner thighs and lick his balls and pulled his cock into her mouth by lifting him off the bed with him leaned back on his hands. He sighed with delight. Finally he had enough and he took control of her for a change. He kissed her softly and caressed her face gently. Then he kissed her neck, and she was just creamin. He began to kiss her breasts, and move down her beautiful belly. She gripped him tight, then realeased him and grabbed the comforter. He plunged into her hot pussy with his tongue and she went wild. He grabbed her by the legs and procceded to give her what she gave him an aggressive eating. He came up to her lips and kissed her and she kissed him right back they were so into one another. He was purple and throbbing and she was pink and pulsating. They finally thrust into and on one another. Slowly at first, then a more commanding pace. They went at it for hours it seemed unitl finally...whooom they lay splattered on her bed exhausted and very happy. Do you want to hear more? I can keep going. Pm me and let me know.-Caress:)
I've learned.... That being kind is more important than being
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I can't believe you dont have a tandem in the script.

I can of course play the role of the grizzeled veteren tm
(think of Sam Elliot, only shorter,heavier and less hair)

I am sure my wife (jumpnfun2) would love to film but only if there is some jumping....errrr skydiving involved.
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I can't believe you dont have a tandem in the script.
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I can do the nekkid tandem... Oh wait, I already did that. Damn! I can do something nekkid... But only if I'm good enough for your porn, Jello! :S

"I had a dude tip his black cowboy hat to me after I provided him with a condom outside my hotel room at 3-something in the morning." -myself

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Scene 1 - Newbie Chick shows up to the DZ for her FJC. She goes through the Course and Jumps. She is so excited when she gets down she just has to show her appreciation to her Jumpmasters.

Tag Team scene.

Scene 2 - She Graduates from AFF. Protective Experienced Hottie Skychick who is looking out for Newbie Chick who takes her under her wing and shows and congratulates her in her own SPECIAL way.

Lesbian Scene.

Scene 3 - Learning to Pack. Lots of Nylon and Strings to play with and on. Rigger gets Lucky.

Straight Scene.

Scene 4 - Mega Hottie Sky Goddess Comes to Visit the DZ. Everyone wants her and gets Her.

Co-ed Gang Bang.

Scene 5 - All Girl 4-way team come to the DZ. Man can those Girls turn some points!!:P Newbie Girl wants to make the team.

Lesbian Orgy

Scene 6 - The Boogie.
Mass Orgy


Now I just need a working Title. Any Ideas?



Don't forget the CRW "dog style" team.

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"I would like it if I were challenged mentally at my job and not feel like I'm mentally challenged." - Co-worker

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......zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..............**huh? wha..?***......beautiful imagery, but too slow getting there. Think "less Anne Rice more Seymour Butts."

So who's on props again? We need a malfunction simulator, a rotating bellyfly horse, and two creepers.
...Four would be too artsy.
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Don't forget the CRW "dog style" team.



One regular CRW, and one with the canopy on backwards.... what a way to do a cross country jump!! :P;):)



Sounds ok. That almost happened except I wasn't expecting my lightening to be backwards, so the other Dawg didn't want to dock-thought it wasn't safe. It's long time to think about chopping. I don't know anyone who would want to land one backwards so it will cost a reserve ride.

Gunnery Sergeant of Marines
"I would like it if I were challenged mentally at my job and not feel like I'm mentally challenged." - Co-worker

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Thanks for the constructive critisism. I will try to keep your suggestions in mind. Sorry that I put you to sleep. I turned around and got some, because I read it to him. Have a great day!:)
I've learned.... That being kind is more important than being
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Gee, wasn't there someone around here that used to write porn scripts?!
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That's just what I said earlier!! You did that once before!



And i love you for remembering me. Geesh, seems like since i got a real job and don't postwhore anymore i've turned into a nobody. :([:/]:P

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Geesh, seems like since i got a real job and don't postwhore anymore i've turned into a nobody. :([:/]:P



It seems that just about anyone who doesn't post whore on the forums, whether they never have or stopped post whoreing, is a nobody. You know your are a real postwhore when you and everyone else you post whore with call each other by your screens names when your face to face.;) Not saying it's bad. If that's what you and your friends like, then it's all good.

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"I would like it if I were challenged mentally at my job and not feel like I'm mentally challenged." - Co-worker

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OK.. Production starts in 9 Days!!

Cast and Crew need to report to Dublin for first read troughs soon as possible. ;)

We will make a Trailer (2 Minutes) for this movie at Dublin.

Still need All Female 4-Way team, Two AFF Instructors, Fluffers and Volunteer Editors.



I volunteer.
I'm not usually into the whole 3-way thing, but you got me a little excited with that. - Skymama
BTR #1 / OTB^5 Official #2 / Hellfish #408 / VSCR #108/Tortuga/Orfun

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how about a jump student who proceeds to fuck her jumpmasters and then every willing guy and girl on the DZ, and only winds up begging for more and her activities include even licking up any cum spilled on the sheets?....
all filmed with skycams of course!!!

Hi Susan!!! I miss you!;)B|:P

she won't mind me using her name...she likes the free advertisement!!!!B|;)

It's good to have friends!!!

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Dropzone.Cum The Movie

Written, Produced and Directed by - Jello-J
Associate Producer, Boogie Organizer and Camera - CSpencefly
1st Assistant Director - RastaricianAir (AD`s should always be belligerent Assholes that you cant hep but to like)
2nd Assistant Director - GFD (This move needs her deviant mind)
Assistant Casting Director - BlueSkySerenity
Costumes, Continuity, Script Supervisor - VSG
Cinematographer - Gimp
Artistc Consultant, Camera and Editor - YardHippy
Key Grip - PopsJumper

Cast:
Newbie Girl: Johnnysgirl
AFFI 1 - ??
AFFI 2 - ??
Experienced Protective Hottie - BlueSkyserenity
Rigger - Brits17
Packer - skychick312
Mega Hottie SkyGoddess - McNeill79 (The Rack (tm)v2.0)
All Girl 4-Way team - ??
Orgy Scene - Flygurl.
Clay and Sheep - As themselves

Fluffers - NwFlyer

So are all the cast members going to be at the boogie?

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Dropzone.Cum The Movie

Written By - Post Whores
Produced and Directed by - Jello-J
Associate Producer, Boogie Organizer and Camera - CSpencefly
1st Assistant Director - RastaricianAir (AD`s should always be belligerent Assholes that you cant hep but to like)
2nd Assistant Director - GFD (This move needs her deviant mind)
Assistant Casting Director - BlueSkySerenity
Costumes, Continuity, Script Supervisor - VSG
Cinematographer - Gimp
Artistc Consultant, Camera and Editor - YardHippy
Key Grip - PopsJumper

Cast:
Newbie Girl: Johnnysgirl
AFFI 1 - ??
AFFI 2 - ??
Experienced Protective Hottie - BlueSkyserenity
Rigger - Brits17
Packer - skychick312
Mega Hottie SkyGoddess - McNeill79 (The Rack (tm)v2.0)
All Girl 4-Way team - ??
Orgy Scene - Flygurl.
Clay and Sheep - As themselves

Fluffers - NwFlyer

So are all the cast members going to be at the boogie?



So where do I "fit" in?
I'm not usually into the whole 3-way thing, but you got me a little excited with that. - Skymama
BTR #1 / OTB^5 Official #2 / Hellfish #408 / VSCR #108/Tortuga/Orfun

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I do believe we need some AFFI's, think you can handle it?



Don't you have to take a course or something -

Can't I be a tandem student with a female instructor?:ph34r:
I'm not usually into the whole 3-way thing, but you got me a little excited with that. - Skymama
BTR #1 / OTB^5 Official #2 / Hellfish #408 / VSCR #108/Tortuga/Orfun

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Can't I be a tandem student with a female instructor



No, you will be my fluffer. Assigned to me and me only. You better break out the knee pads, cause I need a lot of warming up!



There isn't a talented enough fluffer alive - or dead that could give you the help you need.

Perhaps you should attend the rainbow boogie then.
I'm not usually into the whole 3-way thing, but you got me a little excited with that. - Skymama
BTR #1 / OTB^5 Official #2 / Hellfish #408 / VSCR #108/Tortuga/Orfun

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