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Oh my god!Checked my e-mail this morning and my new friend(She actually skydives)made tears come out of my eyes.Oh Crap,What am I gonna do?I thought my ex GF was the sexiest bitch in the world.Not anymore!Think I'm gonna just have to go with the flow with this 1?She is everything a man could ever dream of or want in a woman.Sure she is destined to,If nothing else,be my best female friend ever!WoW,did I get lucky or what?

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OK,be nice now?(lol)



Nothing personal, unless you take critiques of your writing style personally.

I'm all for artistic or literary license, but spaces are a really really good thing after punctuation like commas, periods, question & exclamation marks (parantheses & ampersands too!).

Liberal use of spaces makes paragraphs easier to read, especially stream-of-consciousness writing, which you've got going on. B|

you've got to ask yourself one question: 'Do I feel loquacious?' -- well do you, punk?

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What happens when a stream of consciousness reaches the ocean ?

Does it evaporate or just provide an environment for fish ?

I asked a Piscean but she's still asleep looking for the answers.

Without Virgos the librans and leos would finally get to take over but then who'd get to look in the mirror all the time?

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What good would the world be without Virgos? All disorganized and lackadaisical - and how would the children get to school, and who would the hookers give they money to?

you've got to ask yourself one question: 'Do I feel loquacious?' -- well do you, punk?

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What good would the world be without Virgos? All disorganized and lackadaisical - and how would the children get to school, and who would the hookers give they money to?



I'm a virgo. To this day I have never paid for sex.:|



Of course you haven't. Virgos don't pay for what's free. Tha's why we da pimps.

you've got to ask yourself one question: 'Do I feel loquacious?' -- well do you, punk?

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Oh my god!Checked my e-mail this morning and my new friend(She actually skydives)made tears come out of my eyes.Oh Crap,What am I gonna do?I thought my ex GF was the sexiest bitch in the world.Not anymore!Think I'm gonna just have to go with the flow with this 1?She is everything a man could ever dream of or want in a woman.Sure she is destined to,If nothing else,be my best female friend ever!WoW,did I get lucky or what?



I suppose we should consider ourselves lucky that you at least put spaces between words >:(
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