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I am flying a flag into a demo at an airshow tomorrow. I would like the announcer to say something close to:

"Jeff. Dawson is flying the flag today in honor of his son, SPC Joshua Dawson who is serving with the U.S. Army in Iraq."

Is this cool? I'm more interested in military decorum or proper phrasing than in any political aspect to the thing.

Any advice?
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I am flying a flag into a demo at an airshow tomorrow. I would like the announcer to say something close to:

"Jeff. Dawson is flying the flag today in honor of his son, SPC Joshua Dawson who is serving with the U.S. Army in Iraq."

Is this cool? I'm more interested in military decorum or proper phrasing than in any political aspect to the thing.
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Amend that to say "SPC Josh Dawson and all his fellow soldiers and Marines serving in Iraq."

better ?

bozo



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Are Marines not soldiers? Why single them out?

How about, ""Jeff. Dawson is flying the flag today in honor of his son, SPC Joshua Dawson who is serving with the U.S. Army in Iraq and all our troops abroad"?
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Are Marines not soldiers? Why single them out?

Paul.....next time you are around a group of Marines, call them soldiers and see the reaction you get. It wont be positive.
Army troops are soldiers, Marines are Marines.



Your announcement is very good...by the way

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I do a lot of air shows...flag demos ect...

For the announcer copy~
You, the jumper are of the least importance in the opening
flag procedure...not saying that you don't take recognition,
but prioritize the copy.

Begin by saying something about the flag, followed by the dedication and finally
jumper credit.

For example:
The U.S. Flag, the honored standard of our great nation...

It is being flown this afternoon in recognition of the brave men and women
of the military services both present and past.

.. Including, SPC Josh Dawson U.S. Army, currently serving in Iraq...

...his father Jeff is honored to fly the flag here today...blah blah blah...

you get the point,
gets the message across in a non self promotion way.










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I am flying a flag into a demo at an airshow tomorrow. I would like the announcer to say something close to:

"Jeff. Dawson is flying the flag today in honor of his son, SPC Joshua Dawson who is serving with the U.S. Army in Iraq."

Is this cool? I'm more interested in military decorum or proper phrasing than in any political aspect to the thing.
__________________________________________________


Amend that to say "SPC Josh Dawson and all his fellow soldiers and Marines serving in Iraq."

better ?

bozo



Boz, you post-prostitute, you...:D

I didn't realize you were grounded; nor did I know that you had to abort your plans for Rantoul.

My sympathies. I too will not attend the WFFC this year. [:/]

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Boz, you post-prostitute, you...:D

I didn't realize you were grounded; nor did I know that you had to abort your plans for Rantoul.

My sympathies. I too will not attend the WFFC this year. [:/]


Hiya Mark.....trying not to hijack this guys thread.
Yeah I'm grounded. I posted a whiney crybaby post somewhere.
I'm sorry youre missing the WFFC also.

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