AggieDave 6 #1 February 26, 2003 Jack Daniels my friend Relax my bod, ease my mind John Daniels, Hoo-ahh "Son, if you knew him as well as I did, you'd call him John too..." --Scent of a Woman (edit: I'm a moron)--"When I die, may I be surrounded by scattered chrome and burning gasoline." Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
skygal3 0 #2 February 26, 2003 I love to haiku gives me the warm and fuzzies even on Wednesdays Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gawain 0 #3 February 26, 2003 It's Friday Haiku Even though it's not the day Anytime is good So I try and I scream and I beg and I sigh Just to prove I'm alive, and it's alright 'Cause tonight there's a way I'll make light of my treacherous life Make light! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sebazz1 2 #4 February 26, 2003 Jack Daniels is good Makes you feel invinceable Till you wake of course... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lizzieb 0 #5 February 26, 2003 Jack Daniels I drink To celebrate the good times And forget the bad Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sebazz1 2 #6 February 26, 2003 So let's raise a shot Good friends, cold beer and blue skies And big white puffies... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
quade 4 #7 February 26, 2003 Skydive Elsinore What is up with their web site? I can not get in!quade - The World's Most Boring Skydiver Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PhillyKev 0 #8 February 26, 2003 Bourbon is such crap When compared to a nice scotch 12 years old at least Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SkyDekker 1,465 #9 February 26, 2003 mmm, one problem, by definition a Haiku poem needs a reference to a season. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Brains 2 #10 February 26, 2003 Quotemmm, one problem, by definition a Haiku poem needs a reference to a season. Don't like bourbon huh? How bout a bloody mary With lots of PEPPER LOL, oh wait you didn't say seasnoing?? Never look down on someone, unless they are going down on you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lizzieb 0 #11 February 26, 2003 Quote So let's raise a shot Good friends, cold beer and blue skies And big white puffies... Thursday at the Nut I'll buy a round of Jack shots To toast to those things Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FallingMarc 0 #12 February 26, 2003 Season? Hmm... Jack Daniel's is good Bourbon is a friend in Spring, Winter, Fall, Summer Ha! That's like at LEAST 4 seasons. My haiku kicks your haiku's ass. Mwa hahahahaha. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
slim 0 #13 February 26, 2003 pretty pissed right now i hate this situation 'bout to quit my job then I can't pay rent then I'll get a shooping cart and live outta that I want to leave now women are not worth the time that you put in. blah! <<<>>> A good friend will bail you outta jail... A true friend will be sitting next to you saying "That was fucking awesome!!!' Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sebazz1 2 #14 February 26, 2003 Right after Winter In New Hampshire, Mud season Comes before the Spring I want to know if This seasonal thing mentioned Is for real? is it? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
celljumper 0 #15 February 26, 2003 Don't believe you guys Haiku is not for Wednesdays! F@#$ing up my week! Can't think 'bout drinking I have to concentrate now Damn dropzone dot com Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dterrick 0 #16 February 26, 2003 California bound If I get through T-S-A jumping season starts Quote mmm, one problem, by definition a Haiku poem needs a reference to a season Sky: -you never said how a 'season' has to be defined. Life is very short and there's no time for fussing and fighting my friend (Lennon/McCartney) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
quade 4 #17 February 26, 2003 Why do you say this? Seasons are not important. Haikus do not care.quade - The World's Most Boring Skydiver Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SkyDekker 1,465 #18 February 26, 2003 Quote I want to know if This seasonal thing mentioned Is for real? is it? Taken from http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/#whatishaiku "Modern Haiku. The history of the modern haiku dates from Masaoka Shiki's reform, begun in 1892, which established haiku as a new independent poetic form. Shiki's reform did not change two traditional elements of haiku: the division of 17 syllables into three groups of 5, 7, and 5 syllables and the inclusion of a seasonal theme. Kawahigashi Hekigoto carried Shiki's reform further with two proposals: Haiku would be truer to reality if there were no center of interest in it. The importance of the poet's first impression, just as it was, of subjects taken from daily life, and of local colour to create freshness." Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SkyDekker 1,465 #19 February 26, 2003 Both in Classic Haiku and Modern Haiku there has to be a reference to a season, which could be directly or indirectly. I guess we can add American/Canadian Haiku Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
quade 4 #20 February 26, 2003 That is but one source. HERE another reference, Speaking of drama.quade - The World's Most Boring Skydiver Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SkyDekker 1,465 #21 February 26, 2003 Take from the same link: "It must register or indicate a moment, sensation, impression or drama of a specific fact of nature. It's almost like a photo of some specific moment of nature. " nature, season, pretty close don't you think? In my mind even more restrictive. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sebazz1 2 #22 February 26, 2003 Don't forget my friends We can develop our own Skydiving style... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
quade 4 #23 February 26, 2003 Like the falling leaf, SkyDekker's argument blows. Haikus are just fun.quade - The World's Most Boring Skydiver Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lizzieb 0 #24 February 26, 2003 skydiving style should include beer, jumping or any ol' good vibe Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sebazz1 2 #25 February 26, 2003 True dat, and shit like Back the fuck up now Biotch Cause the surf is up... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
