nndefense 4 #1 Posted May 2, 2020 (edited) I got to thinking a few months back about what it might be like, as an old school skydiver, to gather a few friends together and open an invitation only drop zone for those jumpers who had been dormant in the sport for a host of reasons. I.E., old age, medical problems, life circumstances or simply an unwillingness to bend to to rules. So, I began writing "The Outlaws" in more or less weekly installments. The story may or may not become another published book. It's free to read as I write and post the installments on my website in PDF form. I'm now up to Part Six and it seems a lot of folks are enjoying it. I thought the members here might get a kick out of it, too. You may find it on my website at www.mikemarcon.rocks Be sure to subscribe to my mailing list if you wish to get an e-mail whenever I post new installments. (I never share list info.) Happy Landings! Edited May 2, 2020 by nndefense Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest #2 May 4, 2020 Green grass and blue skies forever...kings & queens bow and play just for you... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nndefense 4 #3 May 8, 2020 Part Six of "The Outlaws" is now on my website! If you are following the story, you might be interested to know that Buzz id about to screw the pooch. If you want to get e-mail notifications when I post installments, make sure you subscribe! (I never share your info!) www.mikemarcon.rocks Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sfzombie13 324 #4 May 12, 2020 that is one hell of a book, i love it. i was just looking for something to read. one small thing, a continuity issue. in part 2, buzz hadn't met joanne, but in part 3 she had known him for years. the only other thing i can think of is there isn't enough of them. great story. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nndefense 4 #5 May 28, 2020 sfzombie13, thanks for the catch in the story line. I'll fix that. Part Eight is nearly done and will be posted soon. I'll announce it before long. Happy landings! 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sfzombie13 324 #6 June 20, 2020 i caught another one. in part 7, you used insure instead of ensure. common mistake and some are even saying it is interchangeable, but i'm old school. i can't wait to see what happens. sounds like a great place to hang out. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nndefense 4 #7 June 20, 2020 sfzombie13, Well, thanks again. They are not interchangeable. My wife is constantly reminding me of this very sin. We' re not married....are we? Ha! Anyway, thanks for keeping me staright. Keeping your first catch in mind as well when this all goes to the final rewrite. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sfzombie13 324 #8 June 24, 2020 you're welcome, just hurry please. not too much, the story is awesome and doesn't need to be rushed so bad it suffers for it. and how do i get an invite to the dz? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nndefense 4 #9 June 24, 2020 sfzombie13, the DZ is not hard to find since it's the drop zone of everybody's dreams. You can go there anytime. That's what my readers are doing. You can follow me and The Outlaws on my Facebook page at: https://www.facebook.com/mike.marcon.92 Thanks for taking the ride! We just chose our First Official Outlaws Mascot. You can see his resume on my website. Happy Landings, Mike 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites