StevePhelps 0 #1 November 24, 2004 Well, wht do you think of my closing credits? Too "Ferris Buehler"? Too corny? http://www.skydivevideo.info/SDV_end_credits_05A.wmv Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
melushell 0 #2 November 24, 2004 yo i dont wanna be rude but i always tought credits mean the text that is moving from the bottom of the screen showing everyone involved in the movie ...............and it never ends actually i have a question regarding this i am useing pinnacle studo 9.0 for editing they have a "credits" text option but i have no darn clue how it works and i am courious how can i do the pro "bottom to top endless credits" ? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StevePhelps 0 #3 November 24, 2004 No offense taken. The promo lists the main players at the DZ. (DZO, pilot, AFFI, TM, etc) It has a "DZ" feel. The credit line shows "I" (skydivevideo.info) made this VIDEO. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deuce 1 #4 November 24, 2004 It's a little too long. I also think you might be better off doing the same sort of riff from a dropzone setting. Your website is exceptional. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites StevePhelps 0 #5 November 24, 2004 Thanks, John: PM sent for more advice. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites YahooLV 0 #6 November 25, 2004 nice, but old. Try something original. You can do it!!! Just close your eyes and shoot.http://www.curtisglennphotography.com Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites StevePhelps 0 #7 November 27, 2004 Taking JP's (and other's advice) I shortened it, took my big feet out, and put it at a DZ setting. I kept the dialogue the same though. It may not be totally original (Ferris Buehler) but I like it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Deuce 1 #8 November 28, 2004 Ha. I'm a genius. That's pretty cool. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites StevePhelps 0 #9 November 28, 2004 Yeah, but after I look at it some more - I want to change out the first hanging container with a red one (not black) and take off my WFFC sweatshirt and wear the school bus yellow staff shirt. But I still like it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites windcatcher 0 #10 November 30, 2004 QuoteWell, wht do you think of my closing credits? Too "Ferris Buehler"? Too corny? http://www.skydivevideo.info/SDV_end_credits_05A.wmv not too bad Steve, could be better, but I'm only saying that cuz I'm not in it. kidding Steve! The only thing I don't like about it is you're not too smiley, sorry I can't help I guess I'm stuck on smiles now. love the song btw Mother to the cutest little thing in the world... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Zoter 0 #11 November 30, 2004 I think it looks much much better than the original...nice one That said.....you looked alot more relaxed in the first edit....and maybe just a tad 'angry' in the present one. Repeat the dialogue in the second edit with the style and pace you did it in the first.....and it would be great ! You asked for opinions....I'm just giving you mine ( by the way....whats the camera view person doing hiding in the kit lock up room anyways....does he owe beer !!) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites StevePhelps 0 #12 November 30, 2004 Thanks, I'll remember that when I redo it this weekend. I'm changing the "color" (see previous posts) to get a less dark look. I guess my tone was dark too. No camera man, the camera is on a shelf. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Zoter 0 #13 November 30, 2004 QuoteNo camera man, the camera is on a shelf I know I know....... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Join the conversation You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account. Note: Your post will require moderator approval before it will be visible. Reply to this topic... × Pasted as rich text. Paste as plain text instead Only 75 emoji are allowed. × Your link has been automatically embedded. Display as a link instead × Your previous content has been restored. Clear editor × You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL. Insert image from URL × Desktop Tablet Phone Submit Reply 0
StevePhelps 0 #5 November 24, 2004 Thanks, John: PM sent for more advice. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
YahooLV 0 #6 November 25, 2004 nice, but old. Try something original. You can do it!!! Just close your eyes and shoot.http://www.curtisglennphotography.com Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StevePhelps 0 #7 November 27, 2004 Taking JP's (and other's advice) I shortened it, took my big feet out, and put it at a DZ setting. I kept the dialogue the same though. It may not be totally original (Ferris Buehler) but I like it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deuce 1 #8 November 28, 2004 Ha. I'm a genius. That's pretty cool. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StevePhelps 0 #9 November 28, 2004 Yeah, but after I look at it some more - I want to change out the first hanging container with a red one (not black) and take off my WFFC sweatshirt and wear the school bus yellow staff shirt. But I still like it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
windcatcher 0 #10 November 30, 2004 QuoteWell, wht do you think of my closing credits? Too "Ferris Buehler"? Too corny? http://www.skydivevideo.info/SDV_end_credits_05A.wmv not too bad Steve, could be better, but I'm only saying that cuz I'm not in it. kidding Steve! The only thing I don't like about it is you're not too smiley, sorry I can't help I guess I'm stuck on smiles now. love the song btw Mother to the cutest little thing in the world... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zoter 0 #11 November 30, 2004 I think it looks much much better than the original...nice one That said.....you looked alot more relaxed in the first edit....and maybe just a tad 'angry' in the present one. Repeat the dialogue in the second edit with the style and pace you did it in the first.....and it would be great ! You asked for opinions....I'm just giving you mine ( by the way....whats the camera view person doing hiding in the kit lock up room anyways....does he owe beer !!) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StevePhelps 0 #12 November 30, 2004 Thanks, I'll remember that when I redo it this weekend. I'm changing the "color" (see previous posts) to get a less dark look. I guess my tone was dark too. No camera man, the camera is on a shelf. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zoter 0 #13 November 30, 2004 QuoteNo camera man, the camera is on a shelf I know I know....... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
