Music Video I entered into a Contest, artistic attempt

[airborne82nd 0]

i know its not the Cloud monkey mike zbzn spin around which is incredible

i entered this in a contest for artistic and for meaning with the song so its about moving along

tell me what you think.

i am not getting the best reviews on it.

my son is the narrater featured in the video so its not about him someone wrote on that they thought the kid is vain and it was a waste of time

but he is the back drop and we used alot of camera work to achieve some of the effects.

by the way mike zban is his idle!

so if you guys would say judge it on artistic quality and say if the music goes with the video. most of the some of the flying video was me filming. one point my son and i dock on my brothers birthday tandem. and i get one exit out of the king air.

and the neat exit with me hanging on a twin bonanza and i film a tandem in the clouds just between a cloud that came up. it was very cool video with the clouds going by.

so anyway its a music video attempt its not all hard core awesome flying its simple stuff arranged



anyway i hope it entertains you and when the non skydivers see it the go crazy been good for people to kind of promote the sport i guess.

a teenager told me that this is how the video should have been made.

and good old video explosion. hc 4o sony


http://www.skydivingmovies.com/ver2/pafiledb.php?action=file&id=3897

[Zee 0]

Yey - I have an idle?

Personally, I think the comments on there are totally jacked. Sure, I think the kid could have smiled a little more but other than that, I thought it was different, and I liked it.

The editing certainly took some time - not to mention how much time it took that kid to change shirts

Don't be discouraged if some people give you shit - if you're trying to make something a little artistic and somewhat out of the norm, someone will always bitch. But who cares? You obviously put in a lot of time and effort in to this and I thought it was well put together and quite original.

Just my 2 cents,
Z

Action©Sports

[Brains 2]

I liked it and can appreciate the effort that went into it. About the only problem i see with this is:

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by the way mike zban is his idle!

Now dude, Zee has a hard enough time finding camera helmets to fit his melon, you ain't helpin things.

Never look down on someone, unless they are going down on you.

[DSE 5]

I liked the work as an artistic effort; I felt the story is lost in the editing though. You'll see my comments on the page.
One suggestion if you're really wanting to get into editing, or become a better editor; Read Walter Murch. That'll take you places.

[Zee 0]

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Now dude, Zee has a hard enough time finding camera helmets to fit his melon, you ain't helpin things.

[airborne82nd 0]

thanks i see your points

ill get the book

again thanks

[airborne82nd 0]

thanks again for all the comments and the information on skydiving movies post. really appreciate your comments and recomendations and thanks so much for taking time to share and to even respond to me.

thanks again to anyone who took time to write